留学文书专题系列——PS实战分析

下面，以一个申请英国某大学传媒系硕士研究生的学生准备的个人陈述为范本，简要分析一下：

Personal Statement

“Welcome to the latest global news recorded. This is … bringing you a selection of highlights for a cross BBC world service news. Coming up.” The opening words of the BBC Global News warmed me up during my high school days every day, which I intended to improve my English listening, but gradually implanted in my mind a great interest in the media industry, for its content and first-class production. Other BBC documentaries and publications such as "The Times" "The Guardian", "the Daily Mail" I read also represent your unparalleled position of media industry, thus inspired me to apply for your master’s program in this field.

第一段：一般交代你选择该学校和专业的缘由（建议可以再简洁一些）

Currently I am studying at the Radio and Television Department of Communication College, East China Normal University, majored in broadcast and TV edition. My professional courses are extensive, covering all the branches of media,...

第二段：简要说明自己目前的情况，在读或在校的专业以及理论学习，重点突出自己相关的研究方向、成绩或者奖励。

I found myself indulged in the field of media, and performed excellently in my academic studies. My high-quality research papers on media in my college days were rewarded by professors, topics varying from different audiences of media and the relationships between the media and culture, to the comparison between Chinese and foreign medias in operation (analyzing the US movie "friends" and Chinese movie "Love Apartments"), to the study on the traditional media and new media. Besides, I succeeded in directing numerous micro-film, advertising and television programs. My movie “***” won the third prize on the Micro Film Festival, for its innovative construction and plot, difficulties in shooting as all roles are cats, and wonderful cutting and editing.

Never satisfied with the academic studies, I actively took part in activities. Being the associate editor of the college publication “***” for two years, I was able to write a review of news independently, organizing reports to write and being the reviewer, in which I learned and got familiar with the process of magazine publications. What’s more, I took a long-term internship as a television news reporter at a regional TV station, learning the process of shooting, interviewing, writing a report, editing and reporting by joining the team work of news production. Besides, my internship at the survey research group of the Shanghai Student TV Festival also enriched my experience in doing my research, as I made an analysis on the degree of media awareness and understanding by the contemporary university students.

第三段：（注意连词的使用）介绍相关的实习、工作经历以及工作经验。

Last but not least, I am applying for your master’s program in media, not only for my interest, but also for the necessity, as China requires for more talents in the field with the rapid development of economy. Your university wins its prestige in the field for the advanced theories and technologies, and the prolong history and culture of England impressed me a lot. I sincerely wish that I would get your approval to go on my further studies, so that I would be able to contribute myself to the motherland after I graduate.

第四段：未来规划，表明衷心，结束感谢语。